In short: The comment establishes that the Draft EIS's carbon accounting in Volume I, page 74 contains a mathematical error by omitting the Eastern Region's 11.5 MMT from the net uptake calculation, resulting in a discrepancy between the reported total (43.5 MMT) and the sum of its components (32.0 MMT), which contradicts the agency's own cited source, Domke et al. 2023, Table 3.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Climate Carbon Storage
- “Roadless areas store carbon, buffer temperature extremes”
- “DEIS Regional Carbon Accounting Omits a Forest Service Region”
- “net carbon loss (31.5 MMT CO2) while the remaining regions had a net carbon increase”
- “an agency may not rest an environmental analysis on a characterization that the record it chose to rely on contradicts”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “Timber harvest, associated road construction, and vegetation removal directly alter roadless character and degrade habitat quality”
- “provide intact refugia where species can shift in response to a warming climate”
- “Protect these lands, the diversity they hold”
- “Mineral extraction, oil and gas development, and associated infrastructure permanently industrialize otherwise undeveloped landscapes”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “destroying these lands for development and logging would be detrimental to tourism”
- “I am an archaeologist who loves to hike in nature and protect lands”
- “I wish to take my kids there for their first hikes”
- “revenue lost for those years will only grow if land is taken”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “Both are factual corrections within the meaning of 7 CFR 1b.7(f)(2)(v)”
- “The issue is substantive under 7 CFR 1b.11(a)(53)”
- “Motor Vehicle Mfrs. Ass'n v. State Farm Mutual Automobile Ins. Co., 463 U.S. 29, 43 (1983)”
- “5 U.S.C. § 706(2)(A)”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEvidenceRequestLegal