In short: The comment documents that the proposed rule fails to acknowledge that existing roadless rules already permit timber harvest for forest health, ignores the economic and ecological trade-offs of exporting old-growth timber, and omits analysis of water quality impacts and cumulative effects from other administration actions, while proposing specific alternative exceptions for fuels management and wildland-urban interface roads.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Alternative.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “old-growth forests, which are more resilient to pests, fire, and other disease”
- “clean water, healthy wildlife populations, backcountry recreation, and other benefits”
- “exporting our remaining stands of old growth”
- “intact landscapes that support millions of dollars in commercial fishing”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “clean water”
- “maintain all of its roads so they are safe for American people and so that they do not cause problems for streams and fish”
- “significant effects that roads can have on water quality and fish”
- “warming stream water temps”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “backcountry recreation”
- “roadless areas are extremely important to American recreationists and other backcountry users”
- “hunting and fishing and gathering and subsistence”
- “resident and visitor fishing activities that are extremely important to the economies of Southeast Alaska communities”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “roadless rule already allows timber harvest and removal to improve forest health/reduce fuels”
- “majority of wildfires are human-caused, which means road access to more areas could exacerbate wildfire risk”
- “forests that truly need more active management are already close to existing roads”
- “strategically placed roads ... can improve suppression effectiveness near communities”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal