In short: The comment establishes that the agency's draft EIS data (Table 21) and cost-benefit analysis contradict the proposed rescission of the 2001 Roadless Rule by showing higher fire risks on roaded lands and a lack of net economic benefit, while citing specific locations in the Sierra Nevada and legal precedents to argue the rule should remain in place.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “watched bears move through timber, tracked deer across open ground, and looked up at elk on ridgelines”
- “know what fire does to bear habitat, to the cover elk depend on, to the granite drainages that deer migrate through”
- “The bears and elk I have encountered in the Kings River drainage... do not observe administrative boundaries”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “A human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands than on essentially unroaded lands”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in its own DEIS Table 21”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “total timber volume affected by this rule is less than 0.5 percent of total United States production”
- “timber revenue to the Forest Service of $5.2 to $11.4 million a year against recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “Forest Service already carries a $6.9 billion road maintenance backlog”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The Tenth Circuit held... that the 2001 rule was within the authority Congress provided under the Organic Act”
- “The agency must explain how this proposal avoids the specific deficiencies the Ninth Circuit identified”
- “The agency owes a direct, on-the-record explanation of its legal basis for any position contrary to that holding”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Black Mtn.Greenhorn CreekKings RiverLion RidgeMill CreekSlate Mtn.
- Law cited
- 28 U.S.C. Section 1291
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal