In short: The comment establishes that the agency's proposal to rescind the Roadless Area Conservation Rule fails to reconcile its own data on sediment loading, fire ignition risks, and fiscal shortfalls, specifically demanding that the Cost Benefit Analysis be placed on the docket with corrected arithmetic and a named funding source for the $6.9 billion maintenance backlog.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “human activities undeniably impact water quality”
- “degrades drinking water quality, increases treatment costs”
- “1,034 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “road construction increases ignition risk rather than reducing it”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in DEIS Table 21”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “The economic case for rescission does not hold up on the agency's own numbers”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “expanding a road system already carrying a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog”
- “net present value discounted at 3 percent over 15 years is estimated to be -$92 to $199 million”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The Cost Benefit Analysis itself belongs on the docket, not in an agency file folder”
- “The agency must place the Cost Benefit Analysis on the docket”
- “show the arithmetic behind that claim”
- “The agency must name the funding source for new road construction”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest