In short: The comment establishes that the proposed alternatives fail to account for the federal deficit, the USFS maintenance backlog, and the specific ecological consequences of increased human presence (such as invasive weeds on the Shoshone NF), thereby supporting Alternative 1 over Alternative 3.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “billions of dollars of deferred maintenance on public lands”
- “Our colossal federal deficit negatively impacts the economy”
- “adding to it by setting in motion any government action destined to require more spending strikes me as ludicrous and irresponsible”
- “The consequence of such action is sure to add to the federal deficit”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “increased human presence impacting the flora and fauna”
- “spread of invasive weeds”
- “Native plant communities are adversely changed”
- “I cherish the scenery and wildlife of the Rocky Mountains”
- Governance Policy Process
- “no reasonable accounting included in the proposal”
- “no distinction between the various uses of roads”
- “managing those consequences is not addressed in these proposed alternatives”
- “I support Alternative 1”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternative