In short: The comment documents specific deficiencies in the agency's analysis regarding wildfire ignition data, sediment and temperature impacts on water quality, and economic feasibility, while citing specific geographic locations and ecological data to request a withdrawal of the rescission proposal.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “avid trail-runner, hiker, and camper”
- “find solitude in nature for peace and mental reset”
- “remote mountain bike trails”
- “Hiking, hunting, fishing, backcountry recreation, and the opportunity for solitude are legitimate public-land uses”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “elk herds that winter in the National Elk Refuge depend on summer range”
- “grizzly bears, wolves, wolverines, and mountain goats roam”
- “animals do not need yet more human degradation of their natural spaces”
- “reducing egg survival, rearing densities, and growth of salmon”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “building roads and the associated sediment runoff anywhere near waterways is one of the worst enemies of water habitat”
- “Removing riparian vegetation can raise stream temperatures”
- “Keep our clean water clean”
- “reconciles those documented sediment and temperature effects”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “rescinding the Roadless Rule could increase wildfire risk”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in its own DEIS”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Big MountainGrande RondeSouth Fork
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest