In short: The comment establishes that the rescission proposal fails to adequately weigh the public health consequences for 1,466 municipal water intakes in Utah roadless watersheds, ignores prior judicial findings on the inadequacy of state-by-state approaches, and relies on a flawed regulatory flexibility certification that averages national losses rather than assessing specific small businesses in the affected areas.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Ninety years of skiing, hiking, hunting, fishing, and teaching in National Forests”
- “Opening them to road building would destroy the very quality that makes them worth going to”
- “outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “watersheds draining these Utah mountains supply drinking water to communities”
- “1,466 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “Road building accelerates erosion and sedimentation”
- “direct public health consequence”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The Ninth Circuit found that local decision-making can incrementally erode nationally significant roadless values”
- “The Tenth Circuit held that the 2001 rule fell within authority Congress granted”
- “The rule already contains its own safety valve”
- “regulatory flexibility certification does not hold up”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “do not rescind the Roadless Area Conservation Rule”
- “The roadless rule is what makes living and working in them special”
- “Rescinding it would be a permanent loss”
- “protect what is left of what I first found there”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest