In short: The comment establishes that the agency's proposed rescission of the Roadless Area Conservation Rule contains internal contradictions regarding wildfire risk and economic justification, fails to properly assess localized impacts on small businesses in Utah, and neglects to weigh reliance interests created by the prior rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Twenty years of guiding river rafting and mountain biking trips”
- “close working relationship with the landscapes this proposal would put at risk”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “built a guiding career in part around the character and accessibility of roadless terrain”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “wildfire rationale offered for this rescission conflicts directly with the agency's own findings”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “Opening them to roads in the name of fire management”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data its own analysis produced”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “The economic case for rescission is not established by the record”
- “net present value range spanning -$92 million to +$199 million”
- “Forest Service is already carrying a $6.9 billion road maintenance backlog”
- “does not constitute a reasoned economic justification”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “sit inside watersheds that are already under pressure”
- “1,466 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “water users across that landscape”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Lone Peak ContiguousTwin PeaksWhite Pine
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest