In short: The comment documents the commenter's personal reliance on the Flathead National Forest for recreation and health, cites the agency's own records regarding the negative impacts of roads on water quality, wildlife, and wildfire risk, and requests the withdrawal of the proposed rescission of the Roadless Area Conservation Rule in favor of targeted management changes.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “streams and lakes that still run clean and clear”
- “protect watersheds as well as wildlife habitat”
- “concerned about what additional roads could mean for water quality”
- “sediment from timber activities”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “see elk, moose, bear and other wildlife”
- “intact roadless areas are part of what makes that possible”
- “effects roads can have on elk, moose and grizzly bears”
- “habitat avoidance, increased human-wildlife interaction”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “paddle, fish, hike, camp, and sit beside streams”
- “Time outdoors is essential to my mental and physical health”
- “access to vast forest lands... is not incidental to my life”
- “potentially permanent impacts to... recreation”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “question the wildfire rationale for rescission”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “reconcile that argument with its own data on human-caused ignitions”
- “support responsible forest management, wildfire mitigation”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternative