In short: The comment documents specific reliance interests in six named Utah roadless areas, cites DEIS Table 21 data showing higher ignition densities on roaded lands, and identifies gaps in the agency's analysis regarding wildfire risk, reliance interests, small entity impacts, and downstream water quality safeguards.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I hike and camp all throughout the wilderness here”
- “The Roadless Area Conservation Rule is the legal backbone that makes these experiences possible”
- “Opening more roads does not serve recreation or quiet”
- “The Big Horseshoe trail is absolutely gorgeous and needs to be preserved”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “The connection between road access and fire risk is not speculative”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “quantify the expected increase in human-caused ignitions from new road access”
- “weigh that increase honestly against any claimed reduction in wildfire hazard”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “1,466 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “Road construction disturbs soil and increases sedimentation”
- “the rescission creates no substitute protection”
- “downstream water quality will be adequately safeguarded”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “Under established administrative law, an agency changing course must identify and genuinely assess the reliance interests”
- “The regulatory flexibility analysis reaches its no-significant-impact conclusion by spreading losses”
- “A certification of no significant impact on small entities cannot survive that contradiction”
- “The agency should withdraw that certification and replace it with an analysis focused on the small entities”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal