In short: The comment documents specific deficiencies in the agency's analysis regarding wildlife habitat impacts, small business economic effects, reliance interests, plan amendment scenarios, and wildfire risk, citing specific data from the DEIS and Federal Register notices to support the request for further analysis and explanation.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “Creatures that need protection: bison, wolves, elk, moose, hummingbirds, and even spiders are all part of our natural world and deserve a clean, safe home”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “ideal summer elk habitat is unroaded land with cover and forage”
- “Building roads into these areas would directly harm the animals I care about”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “1,034 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “California holds 381 inventoried roadless areas totaling 4,389,760 acres”
- “These are not abstractions”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I have ridden my bicycle on trails in nearly every state in the country”
- “People who lead bicycle tours and wildlife trips through these forests are exactly the small businesses that would feel this loss first”
- “My own riding and my own wildlife watching in these forests are reliance interests”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Human-caused ignition density is 22.4 fires per million acres per year on roaded National Forest System land against 3.0 inside the affected roadless areas”
- “human-caused ignitions increase in abundance with proximity to roads”
- “The agency has not quantified the expected increase in human-caused ignitions that would follow new road access”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest