In short: The comment establishes that the DEIS fails to quantify the increase in human-caused ignitions resulting from road construction in Alternatives 2 and 3, despite possessing data showing a four-fold difference in ignition density between roaded and unroaded lands, and requests a supplemental analysis to compare this adverse effect against the claimed initial attack benefits.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “road access drives ignitions”
- “ignition density is approximately four times greater on other NFS lands”
- “predicts that converting unroaded acres to roaded acres increases human-caused ignitions”
- “estimate the expected change in human-caused ignition density”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “NEPA requires the agency to disclose the basis for the environmental conclusions”
- “42 U.S.C. Sec. 4332(2)(C); Idaho Sporting Congress v. Thomas”
- “compliance with applicable law”
- “supplement the wildfire analysis”
- Scientific Research Evidence
- “InFORM Fire Occurrence Data Record and the MTBS burned-area dataset”
- “Aplet, Hartger & Dietz (2026) find ignition density lowest in designated wilderness”
- “The DEIS has the data to estimate its magnitude. It does not do so.”
- “quantitative basis for it appears”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal