In short: The comment establishes that the DEIS's conclusion regarding the lack of material effect of new roads on wildfire ignition rates is unsupported and contradicted by its own cited data, and that 30 of 64 tribal consultation requests are unaccounted for in the designated EO 13175 compliance record.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “majority of wildfires are human caused and that the majority of them are started in places accessible to roads”
- “argument that we need to recind the roadless rule for wildfire management holds little water”
- “new road construction will have no material effect on wildfire ignition rates in inventoried roadless areas is stated without support”
- Tribal Sovereignty
- “We need to do more than just "consult" with the tribes”
- “thirty of sixty-four tribal consultation requests are unaccounted for”
- “Executive Order 13175 compliance record”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “significant impacts of humans on our National Forest and Wilderness areas”
- “areas most trashed, most harmed, most affected are those accessible by roads”
- “tired of the resource damage”
- Climate Carbon Storage
- “reliance on fossil fuels... are putting us on a path to our own extinction”
- “stop thinking we are the king of the mountain”
- “learn how to stop thinking we are the king of the mountain”
What it names
- Law cited
- EO 13175Executive Order 13175
- Works cited
- Balch et al. 2017Cardille et al. 2001Chen and Jin 2022Narayanaraj and Wimberly 2012Parisien et al. 2016
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeAnalytical gapEvidence