In short: The comment establishes that the agency's DEIS fails to apply cited scientific findings on habitat fragmentation and elk survival to the 40.1 million acres of affected roadless areas, and requests that the agency explain how the proposal avoids legal deficiencies previously identified by the Ninth and Tenth Circuits regarding state-by-state decision-making and statutory authority.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “supplies roughly 60 percent of Bend's municipal drinking water”
- “1,522 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “direct threat to the water”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “one of only two national strongholds for federally threatened bull trout”
- “largest monitored population of federally threatened Oregon spotted frog”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “elk avoid roads and select unroaded habitat”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “ground the agency has already lost in court”
- “Ninth Circuit found that substituting local decision-making for national protection incrementally eroded values”
- “Tenth Circuit held that the 2001 rule fell within the authority Congress granted”
- “legal basis for treating that settled question as open”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “ecological integrity of places I value and use”
- “Salmon-Huckleberry Wilderness area”
- “old-growth forest”
- “deserve the full protection of a rule the courts have upheld and the science has validated”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal