In short: The comment establishes that the DEIS fails to adequately analyze the impact of new road construction on wildfire ignition rates in the Strawberry Peak area of the Angeles National Forest, specifically by ignoring the Santa Ana Winds and contradicting its own cited data on road proximity and fire risk, while also failing to address the effects on the Southern California Puma population.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Santa Ana Winds”
- “human caused ignitions increase in abundance with proximity to roads”
- “road density is linked to human-caused wildfires”
- “amplifies the fire risk roads bring to wilderness areas”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “fragment habitats and increase road mortality of wildlife”
- “effects on health, population and distribution of the Southern California population Puma Con Color”
- “core habitat”
- “listed species”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “untrammeled wilderness”
- “wellspring of our health and imagination”
- “most precious for our future generations”
- “local ecology”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “7 CFR 1b.7(f)(2)(iii)”
- “5 U.S.C. §§ 553 and 706(2)(A)”
- “DEIS's conclusion that new road construction will have no material effect”
- “supplement the wildfire occurrence effects analysis”
What it names
- National Forests
- Angeles National Forest
- Roadless areas
- Strawberry Peak
- Law cited
- 7 CFR 1b
- Works cited
- Balch et al. 2017Cardille et al. 2001Chen and Jin 2022Narayanaraj and Wimberly 2012Parisien et al. 2016
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest