In short: The comment places on the record specific data from the agency's own DEIS and Cost Benefit Analysis demonstrating that road construction increases wildfire risk and reduces biodiversity, while the economic analysis fails to show a net benefit, thereby challenging the legal and factual basis of the proposed rescission of the Roadless Area Conservation Rule in the Bob Marshall and Gallatin National Forests.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “More roads equals less habitat and interrupted habitat”
- “grizzly bear, wolverine, elk, and bighorn sheep”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “bird richness declines with road presence”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “The wildfire rationale collapses under the agency's own data”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “road presence is the single strongest predictor of human ignition”
- “far higher fire density on roaded land than inside the affected roadless areas”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “total timber volume affected by this rule is less than 0.5 percent of total United States production”
- “net present value spanning -$92 million to +$199 million”
- “road system being expanded already carries a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog”
- “small-business certification fails on its face”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “My work depends on finding beauty uninterrupted by roads, cars, logging trucks”
- “booking recreation losses at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “It is healing and calming to just 'be' in these places”
- “outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest