In short: The comment documents specific deficiencies in the agency's DEIS, including the failure to apply cited fragmentation and fire risk data to the 40.1 million acres of affected land, the improper averaging of small entity economic impacts, and the failure to weigh stated reliance interests, while asserting the commenter's standing based on recreational use and reliance on the existing rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “paddle rivers that still function as critical bird and wildlife corridors”
- “elk avoid areas near roads and select habitat away from them”
- “roads built for oil extraction may have altered mule deer migration routes”
- “bird richness declines with road presence in forested habitat”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Clean water is becoming more and more at risk”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment from a timber sale”
- “degraded watersheds and higher treatment costs”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “What I want from public land is simple: no vehicles”
- “immerse myself in nature”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The proposed rule certifies no significant impact on small entities”
- “The certification should be withdrawn”
- “reliance interests in the current rule that could be affected”
- “The agency must identify and weigh the reliance interests”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest