In short: The comment documents that the agency's DEIS contains internal contradictions regarding wildfire risk and water quality impacts, specifically failing to reconcile high fire density on roaded lands with the proposed rescission, lacking projections for sediment delivery to 1,522 municipal intakes, and failing to apply cited biodiversity loss statistics to the 40.1 million acres of affected environment.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Erosion and water quality connect directly to what roadless status protects”
- “1,522 municipal water intakes are located in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “Approximately 24 million people use water originating within the potentially affected roadless areas”
- “quantify projected sediment delivery to the municipal intakes”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “40.1 million acres of potentially affected environment represent a real and bounded area”
- “show what the projected outcome means for species and habitat”
- “I do not want them to become something else”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in its own DEIS”
- “far higher fire density on roaded land than inside the affected roadless areas”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “identify, forest by forest, which specific plan provisions would serve the same function”
- “without identifying a single enforceable provision that would replace the protections”
- “Asserting that plans are adequate without naming what in those plans performs equivalent work is not analysis”
- “why the proposal departs from these prior findings”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal