In short: The comment documents that the DEIS fails to project sediment delivery to 7,000 municipal intakes, does not apply cited fragmentation data to 40.1 million acres, and uses a flawed national averaging methodology for small entity economic impacts, while requesting specific quantifications and a withdrawal of the no-significant-impact certification.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “water that once held them becomes something else”
- “skid roads... main cause of soil erosion”
- “quantify projected sediment delivery to those more than 7,000 municipal intakes”
- “drinking water downstream”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “populations decline, fish health deteriorates”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “bird richness declines with road presence”
- “Birds, mammals, and reptiles all need these protected places”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “isolated wild places I have fished, hiked, and camped”
- “get somewhere not interrupted by the constant hum of vehicles”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “certifies no significant impact on small entities”
- “spreading expenditure losses across every small firm in the sector nationally”
- “infrastructure falls into disrepair because of personnel and budget constraints”
- “rational allocation of limited budget and personnel”
What it names
- Law cited
- 36 CFR 294.12
- Works cited
- Andrews et al. 2015
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal