In short: The comment documents that the agency's DEIS contains internal contradictions regarding wildfire ignition risks and economic net benefits, fails to project cited biodiversity fragmentation ranges across the full 40.1 million acres of affected environment, and does not quantify permitting burdens outside existing regulatory exceptions, specifically highlighting risks to Hardesty Mountain and 1,522 municipal water intakes in Oregon.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “hear the birds and other wildlife”
- “road-noise experiments in a roadless area cut bird abundance by over a quarter”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “habitat that makes quiet possible... is not recoverable”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “large areas left for... clean water and air”
- “1,522 municipal water intakes sitting in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “Clean water is one of the necessities of life”
- “Rescission puts those watersheds at risk”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “DEIS Table 21 reports far higher fire density on roaded land”
- “reconcile the rescission with that ignition data”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “The economic case for rescission is not made”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “net present value spanning -$92 million to +$199 million”
- “road system already carrying a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeEA analysisAnalytical gapRequest