In short: The comment documents that specific roadless areas in the Mt Baker Snoqualmie, Nez Perce-Clearwater, Chugach, Tongass, El Yunque, and Allegheny National Forests are ecologically unsuitable for timber harvest and road construction, and that the proposed rule lacks specific written directions to protect wildlife from increased motorized recreation.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “negative impacts on salmon habitat, wildlife habitat”
- “displace essential wildlife such as wolverines, mountain goats, grizzly bears, and elk”
- “protection of fisheries and wildlife habitat”
- “degrade the wildlife habitat”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “local economy developed more reliance and infrastructure to support recreation”
- “far more valuable and suited for back country recreation”
- “diminish precious backcountry recreation”
- “recreational enjoyment and the well-being of our wildlife”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “subject to landslides in zero order drain ages”
- “protection of critical wildlife habitat and watershed resources”
- “risk to the highly valuable fisheries resource”
- “adjacent to the Allegheny River, The Clarion Wild and Scenic River”
- Governance Policy Process
- “I dispute that removing the roadless area rule would return decision making... to the land management planning process”
- “under timber harvest goals set at higher organizations”
- “absence of specific written directions in the plan to protect wildlife”
- “absence of defined limits on the extent of motorized trails”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternative