In short: The comment documents that the agency's rescission proposal fails to reconcile its wildfire ignition data with the proposal, lacks quantified evidence for administrative burden claims, and improperly certifies no significant impact on small entities despite its own Cost Benefit Analysis showing $6.1 million in annual lost recreation benefits.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “concerned about water conservation as temperatures and drought continue to increase”
- “1,466 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment from a timber sale”
- “less reliable water for the people and communities downstream”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “Opening roadless areas to road construction does not reduce ignition risk”
- “far higher fire density on roaded land than inside the affected roadless areas”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “hear running water and birdsong and to clear my head”
- “future generations to have access to the outdoors and to the health benefits of spending time outside”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “names outfitters, guides, and tour operators as affected parties”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The Forest Service held more than 600 public meetings and received 1.6 million comments before writing this rule”
- “It has held none before undoing it”
- “The rescission process has been neither [extensive and public]”
- “agency changing course is obligated to assess the reliance its prior policy created”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisEvidenceRequest