In short: The comment documents that the DEIS and draft biological assessment cite specific scientific findings regarding bird abundance, habitat fragmentation, and elk survival, as well as anticipated adverse effects on 327 ESA-listed species, but fail to apply these findings to the 40.1 million acres affected, project population-level impacts on big game, or provide mitigation strategies for the identified harms.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “bird richness declines with road presence”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity”
- “elk avoid roads and select unroaded habitat”
- “adversely affect some ESA-listed species”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “road-noise experiments... cut bird abundance”
- “31 percent of species avoiding the noise entirely”
- “71 designated critical habitats”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “enjoy the quiet, solitude, beautiful scenery”
- “wildlife watching is an economic boost”
- “reduced hunting success due to a fragmented landscape”
- “economic incentive it brings to our community”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “ESA consultation be completed and published”
- “disclose, species by species, how the likely adverse effects... will be avoided or mitigated”
- “DEIS does not consider how the rescinding... would impact such economies”
- “apply that fragmentation range to the 40.1 million acres”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal