In short: The comment establishes that the agency's draft environmental impact statement contains internal contradictions regarding wildfire ignition rates and wildlife survival that are unreconciled with the proposed rescission, and documents specific reliance interests and economic impacts on local outfitters in the Wallowa-Whitman National Forest that the agency's regulatory flexibility certification fails to address.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “grizzly bear "have suffered habitat loss and the extirpation or fragmentation of their populations"”
- “open roads in grizzly habitat increase contact, conflict, shooting, habituation, and food reward”
- “elk survival rates rose during a road closure and fell again when the gates were removed”
- “paths of elk, lynx, and bears”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Hiking in the Beaver Creek and Tower wilderness areas... has given me something I cannot fully describe”
- “untrammeled vistas of granite slopes, with trees, and wildflowers and streams”
- “safeguard access for future generations and protect the untouched landscape”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “roads... are also the site of high rates of human-caused ignition”
- “far higher fire density on roaded land than inside the affected roadless areas”
- “temporary road may be constructed to facilitate hazardous fuel reduction”
- “agency's own findings undercut that rationale”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “regulatory flexibility certification that accompanies this proposal cannot stand”
- “DEIS names outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
- “specific small businesses whose receipts depend on the character of these specific places remaining intact”
- “Cost Benefit Analysis books lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest