In short: The comment documents specific deficiencies in the agency's analysis regarding bear habitat protection in Bear Swamp, the legal validity of the 2001 rule based on Tenth Circuit precedent, the impact on municipal water intakes, the accuracy of the small entity certification, and the failure to assess reliance interests, while requesting specific explanations and a withdrawal of the certification.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “photograph wildlife, bears included”
- “increased contact and conflict from open roads in bear habitat can end in bear mortality”
- “protect bear populations in areas like Bear Swamp”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “give me solitude and peace”
- “find the kind of quiet that has become genuinely rare”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “challenged and found wanting in federal court”
- “Tenth Circuit held that the 2001 rule was within the authority Congress granted”
- “explain on the record the legal basis for any position contrary to that holding”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “286 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “account for downstream water quality effects on those intakes”
- “specific protections would remain for those watersheds”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest