In short: The comment documents that the agency's proposed rule contains internal contradictions regarding forest health and fire suppression efficacy, fails to isolate the impact of roads from suppression strategies, and underestimates cumulative recreation losses, thereby requesting specific reconciliations and alternative analyses before a final decision.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I hike and camp by the Pend Oreille lakes”
- “I want my children and grandchildren to have wild places”
- “potential annual losses for trail and dispersed area recreation”
- “estimate cumulative recreation losses over a meaningful time horizon”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Water is life”
- “more roads mean more sedimentation”
- “compromised water systems for wildlife and people”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “I want them to experience wildlife”
- “compromised water systems for wildlife”
- “wildlife-related recreation”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “initial attack success rates would be expected to increase”
- “less-than-full suppression is used more often in roadless areas”
- “most new roads are expected to be temporary timber spurs”
- “No analysis in the document isolates the effect of roads from suppression strategy”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest