In short: The comment documents that the agency's proposal to rescind the Roadless Area Conservation Rule contradicts its own prior findings on fire risk (citing DEIS Table 21), presents an economic analysis that fails to confirm net benefit due to a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog, ignores the Tenth Circuit's validation of the rule's statutory authority, and fails to identify specific administrative burdens outside existing regulatory exceptions, specifically regarding Horse Mesa on the Tonto National Forest.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “ignition data in DEIS Table 21”
- “far higher fire density on roaded land than inside the affected roadless areas”
- “community wildfire protection are addressed within the rule's structure”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Hunting has meant nature preservation to me”
- “Wild horses draw me into the backcountry”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “process of discovery, and the land that makes it possible”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “Tenth Circuit reviewed that question and its holding speaks for itself”
- “found the rule within the authority Congress granted under the Organic Act”
- “held that it did not create de facto wilderness”
- “state on what basis, if any, it maintains a contrary legal position”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “total timber volume affected by this rule is less than 0.5 percent”
- “net present value ranging from -$92 million to +$199 million”
- “road system the agency proposes to expand already carries a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog”
- “action whose own analysis cannot confirm a positive return”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal