In short: The comment documents the commenter's direct economic and personal reliance on the White Mountain National Forest, cites specific data from the DEIS and Cost Benefit Analysis to highlight deficiencies in the agency's economic and fire risk analyses, and requests that the agency reconcile these figures, withdraw the small-business certification, and quantify the increase in human-caused ignitions.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “hike on trails throughout the White Mountain National Forest every week”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “preserving our wilderness and sharing resources for responsible recreation”
- “outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “headwaters for rivers flowing to the Connecticut, the Merrimack, and the Saco”
- “drinking water for communities across New Hampshire, Vermont, and Massachusetts”
- “286 municipal water intakes across the Eastern region”
- “taste mountain water clarified by running over the granite landscape”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “The economic case for rescission does not hold”
- “net present value spanning -$92 million to +$199 million”
- “road system this proposal would expand already carries a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog”
- “certifies no significant impact on small entities”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Human-caused ignition density is 22.4 fires per million acres per year on roaded National Forest System land”
- “human-caused ignitions increase in abundance with proximity to roads”
- “quantify the expected increase in human-caused ignitions from new road access”
- “weigh it honestly against any claimed reduction in wildfire hazard”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeAnalytical gapRequest