In short: The comment establishes that the Draft EIS fails to provide verifiable sources or dates for the specific wilderness acreage figures cited on page 195, violating NEPA's requirement for a detailed statement, and requests that the Final EIS either cite the sources and dates for these figures or correct them.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Getting away from road noise is exactly what I go to public land for”
- “I lose the ability to find quiet spaces away from the city”
- “without hearing loud engines”
- “see and experience the undeveloped beauty of our country's incredible landscapes”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “devastating impacts on the biodiversity of the region”
- “biodiversity loss”
- “destruction of the healthy ecosystems”
- “protect our roadless areas”
- Climate Carbon Storage
- “greatly reduce the natural carbon sink that the forests provide”
- “immediate negative effect on climate warming”
- “impacts of climate warming in Asheville”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “Neither figure carries a citation”
- “NEPA requires a 'detailed statement'”
- “The agency cannot answer this concern by citing the passage in which the figures appear”
- “I request that the Final EIS do one of two things”
Attachments
1 file. Counts as 1 — Counts as one: The attachments enclose no one else's submissions; the comment counts as one.
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal