In short: The comment documents that the agency's proposed rescission of the Roadless Rule relies on a forest-health rationale contradicted by its own cited research, uses an incomplete one-year economic model that ignores cumulative losses, and proceeds without completed ESA Section 7 consultation despite a 'likely to adversely affect' determination for 327 species.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “depend on public lands for upland bird hunting, bird watching, and fishing”
- “reduce hunting, fishing, and birdwatching opportunities”
- “cold-water fishery in these headwaters, brook trout among them”
- “genuine wilderness experience”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “provides habitat not found elsewhere in the state”
- “degrade that habitat, fragment that forest”
- “protecting habitat for federally listed species”
- “seeing wildlife in undisturbed habitat”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “primary forest-health rationale does not hold up”
- “rule did not meaningfully constrain fuel treatments”
- “insect and disease risk in western roadless areas is similar to or lower”
- “reconcile its forest-health rationale with these internal findings”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “no evidence of any significant, long-term economic gain”
- “economic accounting is equally incomplete”
- “compare them honestly with projected timber revenue”
- “economic gains large enough... to justify what would be permanently lost”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal