In short: The comment documents that the DEIS fails to project sediment delivery to 7,000 municipal intakes, identify enforceable forest plan provisions equivalent to 36 CFR 294.12/294.13, or apply cited biodiversity fragmentation rates to the 40.1 million acres of affected environment, while also asserting that the small entity certification ignores specific local outfitters and ignores the agency's road maintenance backlog.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “watched what road creation does to water”
- “Sedimentation, degradation of habitat, increased water temperature”
- “1,522 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “People downstream of those intakes are drinking that water”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “The Liberty Bell area has a character that comes precisely from its freedom from roads”
- “degradation of habitat”
- “no projection across the 40.1 million acres of potentially affected environment follows it”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I hike and ski in the Liberty Bell area frequently”
- “It is a gorgeous zone that would be completely changed if roads were allowed”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “guides and outfitters who work in areas like Liberty Bell”
- Governance Policy Process
- “the agency's own analysis makes that plain while declining to follow the logic through”
- “The agency must identify, forest by forest, which plan provisions are equivalent”
- “The certification should be withdrawn and the impact assessed”
- “The final record should address this directly”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest