In short: The comment establishes that the agency's draft environmental impact statement and cost-benefit analysis contain internal contradictions regarding wildfire risk and net economic benefits, and documents the commenter's request for the agency to reconcile these data points and address prior judicial holdings before proceeding with the rescission.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “calmest and most peaceful places I have ever visited”
- “Camping in roadless country there is one of the only ways I have to truly escape”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “quiet up there, with no sound except the wind”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “showcase of the liveliness of a desert ecosystem”
- “pronghorns and rabbits move through the sagebrush”
- “these are not recoverable if lost”
- “Nobody gets to see it how God made it”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “Introducing roads into that network does not protect it from fire”
- “far higher fire density on roaded land than inside the affected roadless areas”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The Tenth Circuit held that the 2001 rule was within the authority Congress granted”
- “courts rejected it”
- “deficiencies the Ninth Circuit identified”
- “state-specific rulemaking can replace a national rule is also a matter of settled record”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal