In short: The comment documents that the agency's DEIS fails to project sediment delivery to downstream municipal intakes despite acknowledging that timber sale disturbances cause up to 90% of sediment, fails to identify specific enforceable forest plan provisions equivalent to 36 CFR 294.12 and 294.13 for water protection, and ignores a Tenth Circuit holding that the 2001 Roadless Rule is within statutory authority.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “quantify projected sediment delivery to the more than 7,000 municipal intakes”
- “Approximately 24 million people use water originating within the potentially affected roadless areas”
- “Clean drinking water is more limited still”
- “identify, forest by forest, which plan provisions are equivalent to 36 CFR 294.12 and 294.13 for municipal watersheds”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “landlocked coastal steelhead”
- “destroying the natural habitat those fish depend on”
- “Removing riparian vegetation raises stream temperatures beyond what suits cold-water species”
- “warmer temperatures reduce egg survival, rearing densities and growth of coho salmon”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “A federal appellate court reviewed that question directly and held otherwise”
- “The Tenth Circuit found the 2001 rule was within the authority Congress granted”
- “explain the basis for any position contrary to that holding”
- “address that court's reasoning directly”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “total timber volume affected by this rule is less than 0.5 percent of total United States production”
- “total oil and gas production from all National Forest System lands is currently about 0.4 percent”
- “$73 million annual road budget and a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog”
- “spending more to open country that has no roads is a poor decision”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal