In short: The comment documents that the Draft EIS identifies significant adverse effects on water resources, salmonid populations, and 327 threatened and endangered species, while failing to demonstrate that forest-plan-level management can replace the protections of the 2001 Roadless Rule, and requests an extended comment period and public hearings in California.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “increase soil erosion, landslide risk, and sediment pollution”
- “watersheds that supply drinking water to roughly 24 million Americans”
- “raising treatment costs for downstream communities”
- “unmaintained roads are a leading source of chronic sediment delivery to streams”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “harm salmon and trout”
- “adversely affect 327 threatened and endangered species”
- “Roadless areas cover just 2% of the land... yet provide habitat for 57% of the country's vulnerable terrestrial species”
- “old-growth forest that has been off-limits for 25 years would be exposed to new logging”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “meagre remnants of old growth forest and minimally disturbed ecosystems”
- “put 7.4 million acres of designated endangered species critical habitat... at risk”
- “once roads are cut into them, that wild character cannot be restored”
- “irreversible loss for wildlife, clean water, and future generations”
- Governance Policy Process
- “A 45-day comment period is inadequate for a 333-page DEIS”
- “I request an extended comment period and public hearings”
- “The agency has not demonstrated that forest-plan-level management can replace these protections”
What it names
- Works cited
- 10.1371/journal.pwat.0000538
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal