In short: The comment establishes that the DEIS fails to quantify sediment delivery to municipal intakes, identify specific forest plan provisions equivalent to 36 CFR 294.12/294.13, apply fragmentation data to the 40.1 million acres of affected environment, or properly analyze impacts on local small entities, thereby documenting specific analytical gaps in the record.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “skid roads... are the main cause of soil erosion”
- “quantify projected sediment delivery to the more than 7,000 municipal intakes”
- “24 million people use water originating within the potentially affected roadless areas”
- “identifies no enforceable provision in any plan that carries the equivalent protective force”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “support wildlife that depends on the interior conditions that roadless designation preserves”
- “apply the cited fragmentation range to the 40.1 million acres of potentially affected environment”
- Governance Policy Process
- “ask the agency to address the specific failures of analysis”
- “The agency cites the risk and walks away from the math”
- “The agency must withdraw the certification and perform the analysis on the small entities actually operating”
- “An assertion is not a substitute for a showing”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “DEIS names outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
- “books lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “examining the outfitters and guides who actually hold permits in the affected areas”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal