In short: The comment documents that the DEIS fails to quantify the specific administrative burdens not covered by existing exceptions, lacks projections on sediment impact to waterways, does not identify enforceable forest plan provisions equivalent to 36 C.F.R. Section 294.12/294.13 for municipal watersheds, and fails to apply the cited 13-75% biodiversity fragmentation range to the 40.1 million acres of potentially affected environment.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “lakes there stay clear while fish advisories multiply”
- “Rain falling on unlogged ridges filters through intact forest soils”
- “skid roads, trails, log landings and similar disturbances within timber sale areas are the main cause of soil erosion”
- “Approximately 24 million people use water originating within the potentially affected roadless areas”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “common loon, the bald eagle, the lake sturgeon, the gray wolf, the moose, the Canada lynx”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “verified populations of the northern long-eared bat”
- “Rescission threatens all of it”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Fishing the Boundary Waters Canoe Area each summer”
- “paddle and camp there for its beauty, its serenity”
- “connection we feel to nature”
- “The BWCA stays pristine because something has protected it”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “ask the agency to answer the specific questions below”
- “identify which specific burdens are not already addressed by the rule's existing exceptions”
- “identify, forest by forest, which plan provisions are equivalent to 36 C.F.R. Section 294.12 and 294.13”
- “apply the cited fragmentation range to the 40.1 million acres of potentially affected environment and put that analysis in the record”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal