In short: The comment documents specific deficiencies in the agency's analysis regarding wildfire risk, water quality, and economic benefits by citing the DEIS and economic analyses, and requests the withdrawal of the proposal to rescind the Roadless Area Conservation Rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “The quiet I go looking for... is already hard to find”
- “I have hiked and camped in these places since childhood, going there for quiet”
- “residents of the Los Angeles metropolitan area who need relief from constant noise, light, and traffic”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “to see and hear the wildlife”
- “watched a bald eagle sweep out of the sky”
- “essential for wildlife like the mountain lion that need uninterrupted space to roam and hunt”
- “bird richness declines with road presence in forested habitat”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “contamination of the water table”
- “24 million Americans' drinking water coming from roadless areas”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment from a timber sale”
- “739 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “The wildfire justification offered for this rescission is contradicted by the agency's own findings”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “ignition data in its own DEIS, which shows far higher fire density on roaded land”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest