In short: The comment establishes that the agency's proposal to rescind the Roadless Area Conservation Rule is unsupported by its own findings, specifically citing deficiencies in the analysis of drinking water impacts, wildfire ignition risks, economic costs to small entities, and incomplete tribal consultation, while requesting the adoption of the No Action alternative.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Alternative, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Arizona is currently in a water crisis due to decreased Colorado River flows”
- “intact national forests that ensure clean water supply and aquifer recharge are essential”
- “Drinking water impacts are unanalyzed”
- “quantifies no effect of new roads, harvest, or leasable mineral development on sediment, turbidity, or treatment costs”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The preamble's own findings do not support the stated purpose and need”
- “Under Motor Vehicle Mfrs. Ass'n v. State Farm (1983), the agency must show a rational connection”
- “Tribal consultation is incomplete”
- “Proceeding first is inconsistent with E.O. 13175 and the federal trust responsibility”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “Economic costs are understated and fall on small entities”
- “USDA estimates $6.1 million per year in lost recreation benefits”
- “Outfitters, guides, and tourism operators are largely small businesses”
- “New roads would also add to a $6.9 billion deferred maintenance backlog”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “using public lands for recreation”
- “Arizona National Scenic Trail crosses both”
- “USDA should analyze the rescission's effects on these watersheds and on recreation along the trail”
- “closures, noise, user conflicts, and trade-offs for tourism”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal