Small family — One letter sent by 3 to 9 people, copied or lightly reworded. One of 3 submissions in its group. See the letter, its submissions and topics.
Scored as the letter — The shared letter of a family, scored once for everyone who sent it.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “headwaters of countless rivers and streams”
- “natural filtration systems that provide clean drinking water”
- “Building roads and clear-cutting these areas will cause severe erosion and ruin water quality”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “fragment vital wildlife corridors”
- “destroying the intact habitats that native fish, birds, and game depend on”
- “Destruction of Clean Water and Wildlife Habitats”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “backpacking in Inventoried Roadless Areas (IRAs)”
- “opportunities for primitive recreation, true solitude, and peace”
- “harms the sustainable, multi-billion-dollar outdoor recreation economy”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “introducing heavy machinery and building new logging roads breaks up the forest canopy”
- “dries out forest fuels, and introduces invasive weeds, ultimately increasing wildfire ignition risks”
- “The Fallacy of 'Active Management' and Increased Fire Risks”