In short: The comment establishes that the DEIS fails to apply its own data on the relationship between road proximity and human-caused wildfire ignitions to the cost-benefit analysis and Alternative 2 effects assessment, specifically by excluding the identified ignition hazard from the Net Present Value calculation and failing to disclose the assumed proportion of roads closed to public access.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “critical to reducing severe wildfire”
- “Building roads into currently roadless areas makes these areas more vulnerable to wildfire”
- “human-caused ignition density of 22.4 fires per million acres per year on other National Forest System lands against 3.0 in the potentially affected inventoried roadless areas”
- “The DEIS contains multiple errors and inaccuracies in its analysis of wildfire risk”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “Under 7 CFR 1b.7(f)(1) the agency must analyze substantive issues”
- “The DEIS must disclose what proportion of roads constructed under Alternative 2 is assumed to be closed to public motor vehicle use”
- “The Net Present Value presentation at Economic Analysis p. 29 must disclose that it excludes the increased human-caused ignition cost”
- “This is not deferrable to site-specific decisions”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “Road building in forest lands is expensive and timber sales have never repaid the costs of building roads”
- “it would cost us financially”
- “Rescission provides no benefit to most Americans”
- “The Net Present Value at p. 29 is described as using 'maximum potential costs and benefits,' yet it carries no line for the ignition hazard”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest