In short: The comment establishes that the agency's own DEIS and economic analyses contradict the justification for rescinding the Roadless Rule by showing higher fire risks on roaded lands, a lack of net economic benefit, and significant adverse impacts on specific roadless areas in Wisconsin and Michigan, while citing Tenth Circuit precedent affirming the rule's statutory authority.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “public land should be managed for preservation, not private profit”
- “More than 300 threatened, endangered, and proposed species live in the affected area”
- “likely to adversely affect, hundreds of listed species and dozens of designated critical habitats”
- “ecological health is not incidental to its value but the point of it”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Chase Creek, at 6,140 acres, is a spring-fed stream worth preserving”
- “286 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “Bear Swamp, at 3,915 acres, is a fen and wetland”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The Tenth Circuit resolved that question”
- “Ninth Circuit already reviewed that state-by-state strategy and found it wanting”
- “agency must address that court's conclusion that the 2001 rule fell within authority”
- “agency's own record does not support doing so”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “net present value spanning -$92 million to +$199 million”
- “expanding a road system already carrying a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog”
- “total timber volume affected by this rule is less than 0.5 percent”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest