In short: The comment documents specific opposition to the rescission of the Roadless Area Conservation Rule, citing the unique status of Mogan Ridge in Indiana, the DEIS's own findings on habitat fragmentation and increased costs, and the procedural deficiency of a curtailed public comment period compared to the 2001 rulemaking.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “value the roadless areas... for quiet, remote and self-reliant recreation”
- “tragic loss of wild lands”
- “economic impact on the many businesses, such as outfitters and guide services”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Roads alter watershed hydrology and stream channels”
- “negatively impact fish such as trout and salmon which are dependent on cold, clean water”
- “removing protections from these lands puts their water quality at risk”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “impact on habitat for birds, fish, and other wildlife”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “extirpation or fragmentation of their populations”
- Governance Policy Process
- “no public meetings and a sharply curtailed public comment period”
- “wishes to avoid the negative publicity”
- “Every conservation alternative was eliminated for failing that purpose”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest