In short: The comment documents that the DEIS identifies specific adverse impacts in Oregon, including the loss of protections for 1.4 million acres, degradation of habitat for 327 listed species, increased wildfire risk due to road density, and negative effects on Tribal rights, while asserting that the current public comment process is inadequate and requesting an extension to 120 days and the adoption of the No Action alternative.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “adversely affect 327 threatened and endangered species”
- “71 designated critical habitats”
- “Bull trout, Chinook salmon, Chum salmon, Coho salmon”
- “Marbled murrelet, Northern spotted owl, Oregon silverspot butterfly”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “undermine the clean water”
- “clean water, wildlife habitat, and recreation opportunities”
- “protecting America's roadless forests for the clean water”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “recreation opportunities that millions of Americans depend on”
- “degrade roadless areas and backcountry access”
- “loss of $9 million in annual visitor spending in local communities”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “waste taxpayer resources”
- “leaving taxpayers with billions of dollars in long-term maintenance costs”
- “significantly inflate the deferred maintenance backlog”
- “economics of these attacks on the Roadless Rule simply do not add up”