In short: The comment documents that the Roadless Rule bypasses Congressional wilderness designation, cites National Visitor Use Monitoring Program data showing less than 1% of recreation use in Payette National Forest wilderness areas, and asserts that the collaborative access process is flawed and dominated by a small minority of stakeholders.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Public Land Access Rights
- “kept open to public access, logging, and recreational use and development”
- “increasing roaded recreation”
- “better, fairer access strategy”
- “opportunity for multiple use is very limited and restricted”
- Governance Policy Process
- “bypassed the official Congressional designation of Wilderness”
- “collaborative process needs to be restructured”
- “dominated by payed environmental groups, tribes, and likeminded members”
- “returned to General Forest designation”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Recreational businesses in these areas are very depressed”
- “leading to overcrowding and overuse”
- “only five thousand visits were in the wilderness”
- “distribution of recreation use”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “manage fires without portal access roads”
- “extremely steep rugged mountainous terrain”
- “very difficult to access and manage fires”
Attachments
1 file. Counts as 1 — Counts as one: The attachments enclose no one else's submissions; the comment counts as one.
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal