In short: The comment establishes that the draft EIS fails to reconcile wildfire ignition data with the rule's rationale, fails to quantify sediment impacts on specific watersheds in the Olympic and Mount Baker–Snoqualmie National Forests, and documents the commenter's request to select the No Action alternative to retain the 2001 Roadless Rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “source watersheds for a large share of the nation's drinking water”
- “Roads are the single largest source of sediment on Forest Service lands”
- “damage to water quality and fish habitat is not reversible”
- “Increasing sediment within these watersheds will have huge impacts on water quality”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “wildfire ignition density is highest within about 165 feet of roads”
- “Building roads into roadless areas introduces ignition sources”
- “The 2001 rule already permits fuel reduction and fire management”
- “Human-caused ignitions account for roughly 84 percent of wildfires”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “provide cold-water habitat for threatened species, including bull trout”
- “bull trout... do not occur in watersheds with more than 1.7 miles of road per square mile”
- “animals that rely on these tributaries”
- “refuge for many Washingtonians”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “Forest Service already carries a $6.9 billion deferred maintenance backlog”
- “cannot maintain the more than 386,000 miles of road it already has”
- “poor fiscal stewardship”
- “cost ultimately falls on taxpayers”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternative