In short: The comment places on the record specific deficiencies in the agency's analysis by citing the agency's own data (DEIS Table 21, FEIS Vol. 1) showing higher fire incidence on roaded lands and an $8.4 billion maintenance backlog, and requests the agency reconcile the proposed rescission of the Roadless Area Conservation Rule with these findings and withdraw the proposal.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly 5 times more likely on roaded land”
- “proposal doesn't explain how rescinding the rule advances fire safety”
- “reconcile the rescission with the fire density data reported in DEIS Table 21”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “378 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing roadless areas”
- “Watersheds fed by roadless areas help protect our nation's water supply”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90% of the sediment from a timber sale”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I hike, camp, photograph, and cycle through national forests”
- “unroaded, quiet, dark sky, and alive in a way that developed land is not”
- “threatens places I know personally and values I believe belong to every generation”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “backlog of about $8.4 billion in deferred maintenance”
- “We can't maintain the existing roads, thus we can't afford to build/maintain new ones”
- “trading them for short-term timber revenue is not”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest