In short: The comment documents specific deficiencies in the agency's analysis regarding wildfire ignition data (DEIS Table 21), lack of projections for big game populations and hunter access, failure to apply biodiversity fragmentation ranges to the full affected environment, and the absence of a public meeting or reliance interest assessment in the rescission process.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “Brown bear, moose, and mountain goat move through it”
- “elk survival rates increased during a road closure”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “largest concentration of shorebirds in the Western Hemisphere”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “watershed integrity that roadless protection provides”
- “removing riparian vegetation can raise stream temperatures”
- “warmer temperatures can reduce egg survival, rearing densities and growth of coho salmon”
- “Essential Fish Habitat and critical habitats managed by NMFS”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Hunting is an affordable and sustainable way to feed my family”
- “enjoy exploring the beautiful, wild, uncharted open country of Alaska by backpacking and snowmobiling”
- “Open country stays open when roads stay out”
- “they even more need this undisturbed land to experience real nature”
- Governance Policy Process
- “proposes rescission without a single public meeting”
- “The agency must identify and weigh the reliance interests”
- “The agency created it with the 2001 rule, built through more than 600 public meetings”
- “I ask that the agency reconcile this rescission with the ignition data”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapRequest