In short: The comment establishes that the Draft EIS fails to analyze the impacts of post-harvest herbicide use on municipal source watersheds, relies on data that contradicts its wildfire rationale, ignores a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog and funding expirations, and defers site-specific analysis of timber harvest impacts on old-growth forests and ESA-listed species, thereby supporting the retention of the 2001 Roadless Rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Alternative, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Drinking water. About 90 percent of my tap water comes from EBMUD's Mokelumne River watershed”
- “Alternative 1 "provides the greatest protection of water quality"”
- “road construction is "the largest source of sediment related to timber harvest operations"”
- “protections should be retained in municipal source watersheds”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “The DEIS's own data undercut its fire rationale”
- “human-caused ignitions are over seven times higher”
- “Fuel reduction near communities is already permitted under the 2001 Rule”
- “commercial timber harvest and new road construction in source watersheds are not necessary to achieve it”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “Roadless areas protect some of the last undisturbed forest, cold headwater streams and wildlife corridors”
- “may affect, and is likely to adversely affect 327 ESA-listed species and 71 critical habitats”
- “11-16% of the operable area where plans allow harvest is old growth”
- “retain the 2001 Roadless Rule (Alternative 1)”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “The DEIS reports a $6.9 billion deferred maintenance backlog for roads and bridges”
- “No prudent fiscal strategy adds new liabilities to a portfolio that cannot maintain the assets it already has”
- “timber revenue "would not be sufficient to cover the costs of constructing and maintaining all new roads"”
- “disclose the life-cycle cost of new roads, and how it would be paid”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal