In short: The comment documents specific deficiencies in the agency's regulatory flexibility analysis regarding small business impacts in named roadless areas and requests site-specific environmental analysis and an alternative retaining the 2001 Rule's protections.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “decreasing water flow and water clarity”
- “Watersheds fed by roadless areas are part of protecting our nation's water quality”
- “Explain how roads and logging won't have a negative impact on watersheds and water quality”
- “This area is a watershed for drinking water for millions”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I hike and camp in National Forests to enjoy landscapes, bird and wildlife spots, and enjoy solitude”
- “Development would impact the recreation industry and the livelihoods of those who depend on it”
- “negatively impact the tourist and recreation economy”
- “The next generation deserves the right to experience the area as I have: undeveloped and peaceful”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “impacting wildlife migrations and homes”
- “Birds and butterflies abounded, and Snake River ran clear through the canyon”
- “Birds would leave based on vehicle noise alone”
- “search for the elusive hellbender”
- Governance Policy Process
- “I want an explanation of why this proposal has not included multiple public meetings”
- “I ask that the agency disclose and analyze the site-specific environmental consequences”
- “I ask that the agency respond in the record to each of the issues raised”
- “provide a reasoned explanation for it on the record”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal