In short: The comment establishes that the agency failed to adequately analyze reliance interests, failed to compare protective alternatives as required by NEPA, and failed to provide a reasoned explanation for reversing its 2001 factual finding that local planning was insufficient to protect nationally significant roadless values in the Siuslaw National Forest.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Alternative, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “depend on many of these areas for fishing and camping”
- “Don't ruin them for future generations”
- “organized our recreation around the protections the 2001 rule provides”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Those protections matter to the water as much as to the experience”
- “1,522 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “Ninth Circuit found that approach legally deficient”
- “required to assess the reliance interests its prior policy created”
- “A purpose defined purely as deregulation cannot produce the honest comparison among alternatives that NEPA requires”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “Every one of those acres stands to lose its only federal protection”
- “local decision-making can incrementally reduce nationally significant roadless values”
- “nationally significant for the same reasons they were in 2001”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal